Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Maui and the Sun

Last week we were learning to follow the literacy cycle to complete a piece of writing.  We decided to retell the Maui and the Sun story.  First we planned our story and then we used this as a guide to write our story.  Our next step was work with a buddy to reflect on what we had written. Once we had finished our reflection, and made any changes necessary, we conferenced  with Miss Kirsty and then we were ready to share our work.  

Sifa and Falakiko reflecting on their work
Perenara and Taiala have recorded themselves reading their stories.  Have a look and let us know what you think. 


16 comments:

Miss Kirsty said...

Hi Perenara and Taiala. I loved the way you read with clear voices and used some expression. It was also great to see you both working together to record your stories.

Alone said...

I like the way you spoke loudly.

Faith said...

I like the way you used expression.

Siale said...

I like the way you were confident when you were talking.

Azuredream said...

I like the way that how you maked the movie

Siale said...

I LIKE THE WAY YOU TAILK

helen said...

I like the way how you were speking lodly





by helen

losana said...


















Hi Taiala I love the way you used lots of detail in your voice and your story


Losana room 10


Miss Lepou said...

Wow you guys read your stories very well. I like the way you spoke clearly and read your stories at a good pace. I love that story, especially the illustrations. I wish the sun would move quickly across the sky again and then I could get more sleep!

siale said...

l like the way taiala takl.

Sara Payne said...

Good reading Taiala. Nice pace and you retold that story well. Keep up the good reading.

From Sara and Vai.

Akanesi said...

Wow taiala that was very good keep up the good work

Losana said...

Hi Taiala I love the way you had used a clear voice and just to let you know your story was very intreating.I love the way your story had detail in your story and it made lots of sense WOW! keep up the good work. Losana Room 10

Kensington said...

good reading taiala nice confedence and reading

Losana said...

WOW! Taiala you are amazing at writing intresting story and I like the way you had used a clear voice in your story and just to let you know keep up the good work because your doing a great job of doing it
Losana Room 10

Losana said...

WOW! Taiala you are amazing at writing intresting story and I like the way you had used a clear voice in your story and just to let you know keep up the good work because your doing a great job of doing it
Losana Room 10