Monday, February 25, 2013

Maui and the Sun, by Helen

Helen has written a wonderful piece of writing retelling the story of Maui and the Sun.  Watch the video and let her know what you think. 

video

9 comments:

Ms Mulrennan said...

Hi Miss Kirsty and Room 10. I am really enjoying your blog and feel that I am getting to know you well. All the stories about Maui and the Sun were very well written and you read them very clearly. I teach a Year 1 class at Hay Park Primary and we are really envious that you have a pool. Happy swimming!

Siale said...

I like the way Helen used a clear voice and I like the way she wasn't shy.

helen said...

I like the way how Helen was taking about the maui and the sun

siale said...

i like the hay you were happy.

Helen said...

I like the way helen was not so so so shy because she has are nice voies and her stoy was so fantastic

Helen said...

Hi Helen you were so not shy you are so good at writing you are the man Helen. Fantastic!

SIOSIFA said...

I LIKE THE WAY YOU TALK .

by kira said...

I like the way you used powerfull words

STANLEY said...

i like the way you talk well done Helen FANTASTIC!!!.