Thursday, November 21, 2013

The Spooky House

Everyone had lots of fun over Halloween so we decided to write some spooky stories.  Timeus worked carefully on his story to make sure it was especially creepy.  Have a read of it and let him know what you think.  

The Spooky House

One spooky night there was a little vampire. The little vampire went inside the spooky dark house, he saw some undead people lying on the ground. He went upstairs to look for the dark witch. The vampire went inside the dark witch’s room but he cannot see anything. He used a torch to see in the dark, he saw some draws and paintings, then he saw a dark witch, she was getting the spells ready. The witch was carrying an object and she threw the object at the vampire. He ducked down and the object flew over his head. The witch had missed. He chased after the witch and he knocked the witch out. He solved the secret door and he got away.

2 comments:

cornelius said...

I like the way you used a clever voice.

cornelius said...

I like the way you used a clever vocie