The Lost Puppy, by Durpi

Dupri has been working very hard to write stories that have more then one idea.  Here he is reading a story he wrote last week about a puppy that got lost.  Well done Dupri on a well sequenced story that has more then one idea.  Keep up the good work!

 

The Lost Puppy, By Dupri from Kirsty Macfarlane on Vimeo.

Jason and the Puppy, By Daimai

Last week we had some children from Room 9 with us while their teacher was at camp.  Daimai has written a story about a puppy and Taiala has helped him use the voice recorder on the ipad to publish it. You've done an awesome job Daimai and it was a great having you in the class.

Jason And The Puppy from Kirsty Macfarlane on Vimeo.

Ben and the Zombie

This week we read 'The Lost Thing' by Shaun Tan and we have written our own lost thing stories.   Here is Kaitati's story.

Rampaging Bull, by Azuredream

Azuredream has written a story about a crazy bull in his backyard.  He has used the fotobabble on the ipad to publish it.  

Little Lost Rabbit, By Alone

Alone has written a story about a little lost rabbit and she has used doodle caster to publish it.  

Little Lost Rabbit from Kirsty Macfarlane on Vimeo.

Athletics Day, By Kenneth

Kenneth has used Story bird to publish his narrative about an imaginary athletics day.  Leave him a comment to let him know what you think.

athletics_day from Kirsty Macfarlane on Vimeo.

Tales from Athletics Day

We have been practicing writing narratives in Room 10.  We have careful to include an orientation, problem and resolution in our stories.  Here are some of the narratives we wrote last week.  We'd love to hear your feedback.

Athletics Day

Last Wednesday we had Athletics.  It was a beautiful day and we had lots of fun.  Take a look at the video below to see what we got up to.

Athletics Day from Kirsty Macfarlane on Vimeo.