Thursday, April 11, 2013

More Colour Poems

Here are some more of our fantastic colour poems.  We have some wonderful poets in Room 10.

Red, by Taiala


Green, by Leilani

9 comments:

Timeus said...

I liked the way that Taiala used a clear voice.

Kensington said...

I liked the way they used detail.

Siale said...

I liked the gummy bear sentence because I eat them all the time.

Scott said...

I liked the way Leilani used expression.

AKANESI said...

I like the way that Lelani speak loundly and clearly

LOSANA said...

I really loved the way you's both used lots of detail in your work and the thing I loved the most about it was that how you's both recording it you guys used a clear voice and you guys were proud to do it well done you guys.

Miss Lepou said...

Hi guys, I really enjoyed your poems they were very descriptive! I liked how you said red is like a cooked pizza and I really like green ice cream, especially goody gum drops.

azuredream taleni said...

wow jovan I did,ent know how you make your comments until you made one. I cant wate to make anather one.

jayda said...

HEY room10 i really enjoyed when leilani speck really nice and clear so well done leilani