Sunday, March 10, 2013

The Fox, by Calais

Calais has been working very hard on his writing over the last week with great results.  Listen to his story and let us know what you think.  Would you like to have a fox as a pet?


Take a look at this video of a fox.  What is it doing? Can you think of some words to describe it and what it is doing? Leave a comment with your ideas. 

13 comments:

Siosifa said...

I like the way speak loudy

Akanesi said...

it jumped because it wanted some food

Miss Kirsty said...

Great work Akanesi. What food was it trying to get?

fa said...

I like the way the fox eat the mouse
by faith

arnav said...

that is a smart fox

sinead.hps room7 said...

it tryed not to scare its prey. always it will run away.

Hati hay park school rm7 said...

the fox was a nice fox to eat what he once

raiden said...

I like how it dived.by Raiden Haypark school

L.J said...

i like the way it was silent

LJ said...

good job calais i liked the way you used a loud voice and expresion . by LJ

faith said...

good job calais. I like the way you used your expresion

christine said...

i like the way that he learn about the fox
BY christine

loveday a7 said...

I would like a fox as a pet.