Thursday, November 21, 2013
The Lost thing
We read 'The Lost Thing' by Shaun Tan and decided to write narratives about our own lost things. Aja has written an action packed story filled with bullies, a minion and a robbery. Listen to her reading the story and see if you can find out how the character in her story used chillies to stop the bullies.
The lost Minion from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.
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I like the way you used expression.
I liked the way you changed her voice.
I like the way she said 'next minute'.
I like the ending when they had tea and cookies.
I like the way you used a load voice
Keep up the good work and you are funny when you said next muimte.
I like the way that you use a clear voice and that you said I found you!!! And keep up the good work.
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