Thursday, October 31, 2013

The Lost Puppy, by Durpi

Dupri has been working very hard to write stories that have more then one idea.  Here he is reading a story he wrote last week about a puppy that got lost.  Well done Dupri on a well sequenced story that has more then one idea.  Keep up the good work!

 

11 comments:

kira said...

did you keep the puppy

Falakiko said...

I like the way you used the word searched.

Azuredream said...

Next time you should write a longer story.

siale said...

good jod

calais said...

next time speck up

kenneth said...

i like the way you talk loud

Taiala said...

I like the way you use a load voice

aja said...

Good work you are so good and keep up the good work!

kiko said...

it is cool Dupri

SIOSIFA said...

nice wrok dupri

cornelius said...

next time face the screen to you