I really loved the way you's both used lots of detail in your work and the thing I loved the most about it was that how you's both recording it you guys used a clear voice and you guys were proud to do it well done you guys.
Hi guys, I really enjoyed your poems they were very descriptive! I liked how you said red is like a cooked pizza and I really like green ice cream, especially goody gum drops.
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I liked the way that Taiala used a clear voice.
I liked the way they used detail.
I liked the gummy bear sentence because I eat them all the time.
I liked the way Leilani used expression.
I like the way that Lelani speak loundly and clearly
I really loved the way you's both used lots of detail in your work and the thing I loved the most about it was that how you's both recording it you guys used a clear voice and you guys were proud to do it well done you guys.
Hi guys, I really enjoyed your poems they were very descriptive! I liked how you said red is like a cooked pizza and I really like green ice cream, especially goody gum drops.
wow jovan I did,ent know how you make your comments until you made one. I cant wate to make anather one.
HEY room10 i really enjoyed when leilani speck really nice and clear so well done leilani
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