Jovan has written a story about his dog and he has chosen his words carefully to help create a picture in the readers head. Listen to his story and leave us a comment about what your pet is like.
Hi Jovan, I loved the way you said your dog prowls around the house, it really helps to draw a picture in my head of what your dog is like. I think I'd like to meet your dog! Miss Kirsty
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I like the way you used powerful words.
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Hi Jovan, I loved the way you said your dog prowls around the house, it really helps to draw a picture in my head of what your dog is like. I think I'd like to meet your dog!
Miss Kirsty
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